Monday, January 7, 2013

"Opening The Door"

In the end is when I solicit critical feedback from others because I want them to express their views on my excpert for I may make adjustments. I "open the door" in the middle because that is the part where I can fully judge the book by understanding what the rest of it is going to be like. The first readers that I would ask for advice is from the people who majored in the english deparment because they have studied english for a large part of their time. So I can honestly trust them considering that that is what they know for sure and no one else can truely judge my writing like the english professionals can. I am looking at a piece of judgemenatal advice for Imay greatly advance my excpert in a fine manner.

Monday, December 17, 2012

The Search For Zora Neale Hurston

The two companions found Zorra's niece then she says that the only one that is still alive who might remember her is Mrs. Moseley. They then decide to visit Mrs. Moseley and find answers but at the beginning if the consversation Mrs. Moseley hesitates to talk about Zora. It's seems as if the two companions need to give Mrs. Moseley compliments in order for het to talk.She mentions that her and zora went to the same scchool as kids.And as time passed she comes to find out that Zora never had a tombstone so she decides to buy one herself. Later on they meet Dr.Bentn and she says that Zora loved to eat. She comes to notice that her and Zora were not that much different at all. And the only way she found this out is by going on the quest to find more information aboutZora.

Thursday, December 6, 2012

The fateful Blues

Poor Janie her love is so scaley like a fish on a beach she always tries to reach her one and only but at the end she can only be lonely. She tries and tries but at the end men always denies her the right to be loved she always thinks she has a tight grip love. She is like a dove in a beautiful pond she is remarkable but men are not so fond of her. She only has one desire but foolish men always makes her retire love. She runs away to find answers but her answers are hidden. The nanny wanted her to marry the rich but she wants only the manly. She thinks that her life might turn for the best but the rest of it influences he journey.

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Time can only answer and ask

"There are years that ask questions and years that answer."  Janie in herlife time has already Had her first kiss whick the Nanny got very upset at not for the fact that she kissed a boy but for the rrason that she is growing up and becoming a young lady. And had an affair with Joe which she loves until she notices that he is slowly taking control of her and the newly bought town. She also has left Logan which the Nanny desired that she marries for the ultimate wealth, but she refuses to stay with him. I believe that the upcoming years will answer and unfold the rest of her unfortunate life. And her past life had been the years that asking all of these bad questions that she has not realized yet so she is now looking for answers. She belives that since she has bought a new town with Jody that her new life will now begin. But Jody had deprived her of that "new life" that she has been wanting.

Thursday, November 15, 2012

DBZA

"should'nt hell have a bed of spikes? or spiders?
or spiky spiders....spikers"
- Bardock Dragon ball z abridged

The One You Love

One person in your family should approve of who you are marrying because if nobody approves he/she will most likely be despised by the family. And the only reason that will happen is because she seems like a bad role model and they will not want her around you. But if at least one out of the crowed approves that one family member will be able to influence the others dramatically. And one will not want his wife or her husband to to be nearly hated by his family and she will not appreciate the feelings.