Thursday, December 6, 2012

The fateful Blues

Poor Janie her love is so scaley like a fish on a beach she always tries to reach her one and only but at the end she can only be lonely. She tries and tries but at the end men always denies her the right to be loved she always thinks she has a tight grip love. She is like a dove in a beautiful pond she is remarkable but men are not so fond of her. She only has one desire but foolish men always makes her retire love. She runs away to find answers but her answers are hidden. The nanny wanted her to marry the rich but she wants only the manly. She thinks that her life might turn for the best but the rest of it influences he journey.

3 comments:

  1. "Poor Janie her love is so scaley like a fish on a beach" What the shell does this mean?

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  2. I understand what you're trying in your opening sentence but I dont get it.

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  3. I agree with your blog, and I like how your blog is structured like a poem.

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